Hello! I completely agree with the first point, and I’ll definitely look into editing that in the release version.

For the second, however, I have a personal (and very strong) dislike for cliffhangers at the end of books, and that’s part of the reason why the game is partitioned as it is (I still get war flashbacks from Samurai of Hyuga 2). I totally understand the appeal of your suggestion, but putting something in my work that I have a beef with as a reader wouldn’t sit very well with me. Further, with the first book being as short as it is, I fear a cliffhanger of that sort would induce more ire than it does excitement 😅

I’d much rather people play the first game as a self-contained story with its own narrative resolution, and only go for later books if they like it enough and want more, rather than because they’re made hungry to know what happens next. Still, thank you for the suggestion!